Tony picked up a sharp knife from the Diner's table
and holding it to the seeded throat
of yet another Big Mac...he sealed his fate
Too much special sauce on too much white bread
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This is just great, 'Fade to Black' am picturing in my mind, due to the title, that last shot in The Diner, though not a Big Mac but Onion Rings....When POOF went [or so I thought the Cable] as the big screen went Black, but ah, then the credits rolled. So The Last Supper so to speak, at a diner with your reference to an old big mac......Great poem, and hope I got your message as intended...I did not like the ending of Tony though, not one bit, it's like, so, , , Okay, what happened..More than likely what ones stomach feels like after a big mac...don't know, never had one, too much stuff on them for me, , yuk! ! ! This had me laughing....marci. :)
You've made a meal of this one, Ted. And made this reader look at a burger meal in a different light......pass me the tuna salad, please. And hold the dressing... A great read. Love, Fran xxx
Don't turn off your set - there will be a sequel! Well done Ted, a tour de farce and one in the eye for Macs! Rgds, Ivan