Saturday, October 17, 2015

A Sonnet Xiv - The Trapeze Artist Comments

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Life is a circus of tryst
and I am a trapeze artist
I perform exercises to remain
I do stunts to entertain
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M. Asim Nehal
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Valsa George 18 October 2015

Life is not an easy game! It is a tight rope walk for everyone...... whether a trapeze artist or a buffoon, a poet or artist! Everyone has his share of sorrow and hardships! Those who take life in a sportive spirit win! Great write Asim!

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T Rajan Evol 18 October 2015

Wonderful poem, we all are following the same. God bless you.

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Loke Kok Yee 18 October 2015

Thanks for this insight into life in a circus.

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Rajnish Manga 18 October 2015

So sweet yet so sad. The poem brings out the reality of life. We all share the experience of 'The Trapeze Artist'. Thanks for this wonderful poem, M. Asim ji. I would like to quote the following lines: Inside my heart I see all hollow /....Jugglers are great strugglers / This is short story of my Life’s circus.

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2015

Thanks much for your encouraging comments, Also my special thanks for enlightenment on Limerick writing, I made correction as per your suggestion and hope it is now in line with the format. Thanks again.

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