Thursday, February 21, 2008

A Sonnet To Felisse Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm really happy since the day we've first met,
I gave you a smile and asked what your name is,
'Felisse' that name was in my head 'till sunset,
And I never forget about that promise,
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Geovanni Leaño
COMMENTS

Very lovely heartfelt sonnet.Great form and a pleasure to read.

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Ivor Hogg 19 August 2008

Nicely written but your syllable count is a little off

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Lynda Robson 21 February 2008

A lovely sonnet to Felisse, hope it all goes well, Lynda

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Geovanni Leaño

Geovanni Leaño

Zamboanga City
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