Skin of creamed alabaster
lips of cherry balm trees
she looked like a Godess from antiquity
her smile like a halo
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The sonnet form is well suited to expressions of love. This is a fine example. Excellent write. As always, Sandra
Simply wonderful. It's so cheerful and loving, and very beautiful imagry. it's so smooth. I love it. Thank you for sharing it. Mary
This poem flows so very easily, love it, it's luscious reading. Favourite line has to be about the flowers bending out of the way, so very fine! HG: -) xx
Charlie - you do know how to write a beautiful poem. Your flow and rhyme are impeccable, and I love the ease of readability. You are a fine craftsman, sweet Charlie! Hugs, Linda :) xx
Charlie, I gave this a ten, simply because I love the flow of the words. If any one word comes to mind to describe this work, I would say 'fluid' to tell about it. Beautiful love sonnet.
I must have missed this one.... but the best is allways the last. Splendid work, makes a heart sigh.