Monday, May 14, 2012
A Sonnet Comments
Rating: ★3.5
Tear from the mother her wrinkled new one
order to the front the perfect only son
drive a daughter wailing from her father's home
swear the gods no more in heaven roam
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Anele The_african_son Potelwa (umbhali_wasembo)
15 May 2012
14 lines of wise and interesing lines, I love it, The_African_Son
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8/3/2025 3:42:37 PM # 1.0.0
As Sonnets go, this one bumps along like a camel, mostly because 1.It is written in thumping trochaic meter 2. It presents a list of rhymed couplets that bear no relation to functions of various sonnet forms. 3. It could be salvaged.