It has been a long wait...
but you never said anything,
tranquil like a deep greenish lake...
frightening and tempting..
...
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The day swirled in to dusk, it's twilight.... both outside and in life! time flew away..on butterfly wings, crawling and in haste.... Beautiful imagery. I love the entire layout and approach you’ve used to tell this story.
a very intense poem, , the personal pathos so beautifully depicted in a a few stanzas, thanx
my vote is a 10. Thank you.