Wednesday, April 6, 2011

A Song That Never Fades! Comments

Rating: 5.0

It has been a long wait...
but you never said anything,
tranquil like a deep greenish lake...
frightening and tempting..
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sabitha geethall
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Walterrean Salley 18 June 2011

my vote is a 10. Thank you.

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Walterrean Salley 18 June 2011

The day swirled in to dusk, it's twilight.... both outside and in life! time flew away..on butterfly wings, crawling and in haste.... Beautiful imagery. I love the entire layout and approach you’ve used to tell this story.

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R.k Das 06 April 2011

a very intense poem, , the personal pathos so beautifully depicted in a a few stanzas, thanx

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sabitha geethall

sabitha geethall

trivandrum, kerala
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