A Song So Little Comments

Hi There Claudia: Your poem reminded me of one I had written while watching my five-year-old daughter as she was singing a song at the Kingdome Hall. As I saw the emotion well up in her eyes, it surprised me that one so young could get that emotional over the thoughts in a song. Of course, that inspired me to write a poem. It is called, ‘I Saw O’er Mist. Hope you enjoy it. Adeline

A well thought out poem that contained form which back up the entire meaning. If that what you were going for you accomplished it. Poem could need some punctuation to back up the meaning and form.