# # A Song Of Joy Comments

joyful.. the last line is lovely

Very nice allegorical mating between a bird and yourself! Thank you for your poetry!

very meaningful... I like it...

i still have my wings to fly which would take me to the meadows a song of joy i could sing there my soul would listen wow is the word.......... this stanza registers itself into immortality....great work

Its manifests your art experience!

Good story about remaining true to our own natures.

An enchanting poem which suggest a mellow joy tune. Beautiful poem.

sam....a very good poem.....feelings expressed very well...10

Your song resonates with joy and sweet melody in the mind of any sensitive reader. Best wishes. A.

I am lucky, every morning I sit and listen to many songs of joy, sung by pretty song birds in my garden. They sing for their own pleasure but sure as the wind the lovely sound travels to entertain all that truly listen. Great poem Bob 10+

still have my wings to fly which would take me to the meadows very touching... regards sandhya

liked the theme inside this poem...ant way of poetic presentation too...much different from your other works...thanks...10

Great job Sam, penned in your unique style...so brilliantly expressed

an impressive verse! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

i still have my wings to fly which would take me to the meadows i love this..very touching lines.

I do agree that we would be compelled to put a mask in tune with the world but for how long? Everybody has a limit of tolerance beyond which he would remove his mask and be himself. Actually speaking, nobody is really wearing any mask in tune with the world. It is only that the individual tolerance is different from person to person for one's individual nature. Nobody can really go beyond one's individual nature at a given point of time. If a man happens to be hypocritic, it only means that this is his nature. There is an inherent nature for every indivudal in this world and this happens to be the influencing factor for the overall nature of an individual.

Real happiness is inwards. Nice write.

Lovely..your last lines are especially touching.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

Hmmm, keep singing your song, Good write top mark

feelings of the inner heart nicely expressed. beautifull surya