Thursday, May 20, 2010

A Song Of Joy Comments

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From the top of the mountains
We breathed the pure air
Enjoying the stunning, awe-inspiring views,
That stretched around there.
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Maria C. Pires Costa
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Terence George Craddock 27 August 2012

a nice poem and a beautiful theme, I also could not resist writing a few songs of joy also :)

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Afzal Shauq 27 May 2010

From the top of the mountains We breathed the pure air Enjoying the stunning, awe-inspiring views, That stretched around there. Coming down to the green valley We got involved in the breeze around, And walked by the little brook Singing together melodious sounds. The sweet scent of flowers and bushes Accompanied us all the way long Allowing for a quiet reflection, In stillness and love, Away from the throng. so short but very meaningful, romantic way expression and inspiring.. I really love your way of writing poems.. quite rich and heart touching

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pleasurable to read this fine excellently written poem of yours!

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