Wednesday, July 9, 2014

A Song Of Hope Comments

Rating: 4.8

When the pall of gloom overcasts my mind
And at cross roads bewildered I stand
I tell myself
This shall pass
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Valsa George
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Hi Valsa Madam, this poem ranks #40 in the new feature "Best Poems Of Members" on PoemHunter. Congratulations.

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Anjandev Roy 21 August 2022

This is an outstanding work.........congrats.....

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 August 2022

Congratulations being chosen as The Member Pioem Of The Day, dear Valsa. Such a beautiful poem in a classic way,5 Stars TOP Score

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Richard Wlodarski 18 August 2022

Valsa, it's so great to see you receiving this great honour of POD. Very well deserved! Your inspirational poetry, and your support and encouragement all these years, have been a source of great motivation for me. Congrats on POD!

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Jayne Louise Davies 18 August 2022

Congratulations on Poem Of The Day x Well deserved.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 August 2022

Such a beautiful poem...a timeless piece. Many congratulations! !

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Savita Tyagi 16 January 2021

Yes this too shall pass.......the moments of collective pain and uncertainty seizing the globe....yes this too shall pass and the rays of hope will fill the mornings......

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 October 2020

Misfortune flows in life but it does not last for long time. We feel and see that fortune blooms as peer time's flow and new hope arises. Cycle of seasons go on changing and love fills the air. Doves sing amazingly. This poem is very beautiful. Reading this again and again I get immense pleasure.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 September 2020

When the pall of gloom overcasts my mind And at cross roads bewildered I stand I tell myself This shall pass this is the key point. every thing we experience will pass. tony very fine poem dear Valsa. thank you. tony

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Bharati Nayak 30 August 2020

Such a lovely poem of Hope.I come back to read it again and again.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 August 2020

When the burdens weigh heavier than you can bear, you like it to pass over. You have much trust on God and God has made this sky. When the cycles seasons change, doves sing eagerly the song of God.This poem expresses your devotion as well as perception towards nature. By seeing nature and feeling God we forget about all burdens.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 August 2020

Love will again fill the air Doves of peace will coo in pair The wintry chill will lose its frosty bite Spring will come on wings like a sprite...... very inspiring lines. I love these lines. A beautiful poem is amazingly shared.

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Richard Antwi 01 July 2020

When the pall of gloom overcasts my mind And at cross roads bewildered I stand I tell myself This shall pass Wonderfully woven together to tell a story for all. Well done.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 June 2020

This too shall pass..... but reading this poem again and again will never pass VG you ar a poetess loved enmass

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 April 2020

As the cycle of seasons keep changing, life is changing with it. Sorrow must be changed to happiness.We have to wait for the pendulum of time to have its full swing. Astute perception has been reflected in this poem. Marvelous work.

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Kim Barney 04 April 2020

Wonderful poem, Valsa! I especially like the last stanza. There needs to be opposition in all things. If we did not have winter, we couldn't appreciate the summer. Well done!

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Budhashaya Behera 10 February 2020

Always we have hope within us. Our kind selves feel these and motivate life towards our God. A powerful love will definitely fill the path of air in beauty and joy. Doves of peace will coo by his greatest grace. You have nicely written an interesting poem. Thank you very much for sharing this.10

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Flower Prince 04 October 2019

Your song of hope has motivated me a lot and now I am singing this song. Wow1 Wow!

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Anjandev Roy 03 October 2019

Excellent, simply excellent. Thank u.anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 July 2019

A very motivational piece of poetry dear madam! When I feel depressed, I feel like visiting this inspiring poem!

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