Monday, March 26, 2007

A Song Of Her Garden Comments

Rating: 5.0

She builds her pleasant garden
Where the winds are not so strong
The sun sometimes relenting
Becomes her companion
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Frank Bana
COMMENTS
Diana Van Den Berg 03 August 2013

Poignant, wistful, beautiful.

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Tatianna Rei Moonshadow 31 October 2008

Absolutely sensational dear, I enjoyed this piece very much. I very much agree with Onelia that it reminds me of Britain. I love the low-key rhymes and the words you have put together in a unique way to make those rhymes. Thank you for sharing.

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Onelia Avelar 15 May 2008

A very romantic one - reminds me the unique British gardens. They are pieces of art, like this lvely poem.

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Joscephine Gomez 07 May 2007

Your garden entices. Your poem sounds like a tribute to the garden's source. Mysterious.

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