She builds her pleasant garden
Where the winds are not so strong
The sun sometimes relenting
Becomes her companion
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Absolutely sensational dear, I enjoyed this piece very much. I very much agree with Onelia that it reminds me of Britain. I love the low-key rhymes and the words you have put together in a unique way to make those rhymes. Thank you for sharing.
A very romantic one - reminds me the unique British gardens. They are pieces of art, like this lvely poem.
Your garden entices. Your poem sounds like a tribute to the garden's source. Mysterious.
Poignant, wistful, beautiful.