A Song Of Eternity In Time Comments

it is very nice and amazing

Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

too tangential, somewhere in race for vocabulary the feelings are lost

Beautiful expression. Nice penmanship.

Within a tear that on her lash hung gleaming. Some one hath wept 'twixt hope and fear.... //.... A Song Of Eternity with love, fear, hope and divine grace.

A beautiful and touching poem

remarked her pain, ............. well penned

beautiful poem-perfect rhyme, rhythm, meter.

Such a lovely poem by Sidney Lanier👍👍👍

Nice poem, I liked the words. Do u have a live performance?

The poet has been conscious of his rhyme, rhythm and meter... and his verses of magic add that classical master's touch. Beautiful!

Beautiful and moving. Time is but a tear......

Yet in his little lucent sphere Our star of stars, Eternity, is beaming........................... Excellent.

This poem is a very moving and remorseful tune. The senselessness of having, for whatever reason, to depart as lovers. Sidney has always been able to move emotions very well, Paul

A beauty! ! A lonely starry night and lovers enjoying the time. With a nice flow it gives a feeling of goodness. Thanks for sharing.

a stunning poem of a moment of time beautifully expressed?

Leafy lane...... thanks for sharing....

Our starlight! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

beautiful poem...so nicely written and rhymed..

And this is just beautiful