A Song Of Despair Comments

Good work.thanks for sharing this poem.

But there is hope ahead of you. Nice work.

The elegy of a love lorn soul! ! Intense emotions powerfully conveyed.....A very nice poem! !

THIS IS A MARVELLOUS PIECE OF ART …………………………………….. What a nice poem IT IS! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us. please read some of mine.ESPECIALLY ‘’I WANT TO DIE’’

Revenge is a kind of wild justice.-Bacon. When you suffer within yourself, you differ from others and pour forth lines of melancholy verse. Cheers!

A great write with a good story line and flow good job Vipins

Superb! ! ! Another 10...........

A sad poem but nevertheless showed your genious, Vipins. Love this compo and as always the words pierced the heart and wow! What a blow! In France we say, Bravo! If you are a cook, you are a great cordon bleue. I would like to be invited in your feasts everyday. The taste of your poem is irrisistible to the palate. Keep-up and discover more recipes of words...Virginia

Holy man! Holy spirit! See this romantic lyric. Oh, My god! This poem is my bundle of joy and cup of tea, I don't why! Yes my fellow poet you rocked my heart with this love poem. I love to sing........................ 'Till to the depth of my heart's creek To cascade tears through my cheek. But this moon heart is stone-dead For she left from my heart's stead.' The lugubriousness spread everywhere in the poem, Showing the feelings of losing a lover. The poem is genuine and origin in its idea. Definitely pick of all your poems. Loud Cheers, Can your hear!

Brillant use of how you use your words...poetic and words flows into each sentence like a ripple affect...love this poem...sad, but love it.

I feel like I am in a dream when I read this, or a painting by Van Gogh, although you portray everything with grief and anguish, I can't help but feel that I am floating in your words that portray this story of heartache. Touching and Fantastic.

I love your poem. It is so descriptive and sureal. You're an amazing poet, kepp it up.

That floats everywhere in air, Till to the depth of my heart's creek To cascade tears through my cheek. But this moon heart is stone-dead deep of the real world we feel it

I am feeling the hopelessness of this lost love, i love the flow n use of diction, the metaphor.... Another good one, man!

Wow! A superb reservoir of strong imagery and fine penning words! Pain is the other side of the coin, my friend! Being alone means you are in your own space and time without being disturbed by anyone! However, being drown in loneliness, means something else very heavy and deep not easy described in simple words. I can fully identify with your powerful and thought provoking write! 10+++ Keep it up, Champ! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC...

awesome poem with a nice set of rhyming words..

its gives a feeling of hurt and loneliness............ very well expressed.. good work..

Very beautiful work. We all fall into the hands of the wicked, and painful, you've turned it all into great art.

nice poem, dear, great feeling

LOSSES ALWAYS BRING PAIN............What remains after destruction is only our broken heart and tears....nice poem....