Wednesday, March 30, 2005

A Song Not Yet Finished Comments

Rating: 5.0

You loved me once among
Budding tea roses built
To be what I was not,
A tender, passing beauty
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Charlotte Ballard
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Stug Jordan 01 April 2007

This is beautiful, from the title on its own, to the poem which has a perfect economy, lovely imagery, and heart-full of feeling. All true and perfectly executed. Sx

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Charlotte Ballard

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