Thursday, April 12, 2018

A Song From The Paddy Field Comments

Rating: 5.0

And that song when hit my heart
Fragrant from the paddy green
Feasted my mind sat to muse
Masticating some past cud
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Indira Renganathan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 April 2018

Dear madam, you have so hauntingly and touchingly inscribed the memories of childhood through a paddy field. Some of he lines are more impressive. Let it be quoted...... .......................Grandpa couldn't sing fast her speed She kept laughing way back home The paddy fieldbade good bye Set right its reel, mind swirled back Beautiful poem.10

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Valsa George 15 April 2018

As a child I too enjoyed the songs of rural women weeding in the paddy fields.....! But paddy fields are fast disappearing and no women folk to be seen in weeding or harvesting! Your childhood memories are nostalgically presented in a beautiful way! Thanks for sharing!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 April 2018

And that song when hit my heart Fragrant from the paddy green Feasted my mind sat to muse Masticating some past cud..........This song of heart down the memory line is heart touching! Thanks dear madam for sharing! Pray God bless you always..............(Dillip)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 April 2018

Beautifully crafted and well executed piece. A vivid portrayal of a wonderful memory.10++++ Onto my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 April 2018

A very touching memory. So heartwarming that my heart melts for this memory you shared, Indira. This elegantly crafted write made me remember my grandfather whom I have great memories with. Happy are we who had experienced life with our grandfathers. A privilege that others were deprived of.

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Seema Chowdhury 12 April 2018

A beautiful and a heartfelt write. Thanks for sharing.

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