A Song For You Comments

i dont see it as a poem written out of patriotism or for ones country! ! ! ...i see it in red... in flesh and blood and the trappings of love be it from scented candles or in the depth of drawn curtains in halogen lamps....even if there is a longing for it to be bright as sun light for all to see. i liked the lines for the contextual richness...its an ardent desire not to loose a cherished loved persona...even through it is not out in the open and under wraps... liked