Friday, January 15, 2010

A Song For Rachel Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watch you, sat next to me smiling,
Telling me things, sometimes, just sometimes,
I see that smile change,
Morph, into a grimace, for a second, pain flickers across your face,
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Kat 'Happy Girl' Happy
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Rachel Anderson 06 March 2010

this honestly is the only poem ever to make me cry when i read it. i really didnt know you loved me that much though lol. i rekon your poems rock.. especially the ones about meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 10 outta 10, great job dude and keep it up: D x

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 22 January 2010

'I want to pay you back': it's good to read it about friendship. To think well, it's very simple. Happiness could be just this, the author could be called 'Happy Girl' in the true sense.

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