A Song For My Lost One Comments

day when I was eight,8 17 26 35 44 53ETC IMMORTAL THINGS HAPPEN TO ALL GENERALLY APPLY PARETO'S LAW WILL YE CHECK BACK WHAT HAPPENED @17 TELL ME EXTRAORDINARY read my MOMS SMILES UR AN UPCOMING POET

Sad story of irreplaceable loss embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing RAJAT.

I clean carefully your smiling fixed, framed, faded face, I wreathe and decorate flowers faithfully with lace And incenses' aroma alters room's time and space, And light memory is enlightened with memory fresh.- - - - Memories have been so nicely framed in this poem.A great poem.Congratulations.

Thank you very much....@Dr.Tony Brahmin....Your words are inspiration for me....thanks a lot.....

Every Spring brings today's morn is dedicated to pluck the flower. incenses' aroma alters room's time and space, how you loved me carefully, for your powerful invisible hand I am to wait here at bank for bargee help me crossing river These are the points i collected from your beautiful poem. Thank you for your thoughts, imaginations. tony

Time had cut the cord carelessly between you and me, And I today try to tightly knot the torn lace in mournful glee. a good poem on life and time, thank you dear poet. tony

keep writing..... ... .... I am elated.

Every Spring brings this day to renew memory light. What an amazing poem this is really ion death topic with art of time! 10