Wednesday, March 14, 2012

A Song For Magpies Comments

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Black and white
From light and shade
Swoops parental vengeance,
Just in case.
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Danny Draper
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Soulful Heart 05 April 2014

So funny...... tickles till u break the ice and ha ha ha....

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Valsa George 12 November 2013

It is quite interesting to hear about how the magpies protect their young ones! If you are on their way, you will lose your hair and skin.... Beware! Again your body can't take in any more damage, I fear!

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Ken E Hall 08 November 2013

Well crafted song for the Magpies who sing 'keep away from my babies' and a clever humerous ending...sure have to be careful walking near their nests..regards

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Kevin Patrick 12 March 2013

A beautiful tribute to one of nature’s spectacles, I love your use of language it’s so descriptive and imaginative that one verse impacts great detail. Where I live magpies is a rare sight, although their cousins the crows are very familiar, although I have read other poems where magpies are mentioned, this one was great in that it actually concentrated on Them as the topic. A really great write love every verse.

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2013

something about a bird striking back of human head to guard nest? ? ? this was not easy. maybe it is the difference between your part of the world and mine? thanks for sharing anyway.

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 16 July 2012

Perhaps the song so sensuous Could any predator dissuade? awakening spirits in the composure..........! !

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Karen Deeks 18 March 2012

Sounds absolutely horrendous... Our magpies seem a tad more withheld (I'm glad to say) . Intriguing and informative. Direct language, constructively gathered, bravo Cheers Karen

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Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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