Sunday, February 18, 2018

A Song For Lunar Lovers Comments

Rating: 5.0

O' crescent moon I truly adore you so
Even the full moon upon the shore you know
Art' thee poetically made of cream white ivory
or maybe marble or like cheese in the story?
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
COMMENTS
Bill Cantrell 23 July 2019

I must tell you, this poem left me spell bound, this should be the format for poetry lessons in school, I don’t think I have ever read a better piece of poetry, truly, this has made my day...week...month! ! Just absolutely perfect! ! ! ! A thousand 10s, I will recommend this to poemhunter for poem of the day! ! !

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Bree Z Love 21 January 2019

Absolutely mesmerizing verse, ...When my day not my sky is blue Cradle me in your crescent won't you? ...

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Dev Anand 07 August 2018

Moonlight, moonshine the most poetic glow May darkness heed what your light symbolises, And realise, acknowledge and follow the one true God's opinion. Moon is very very romantic.......liked your poem very much.. dev

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Riza Braholli 25 July 2018

Moonlight, moonshine the most poetic glow May moonlight through my windows flow... and this then flows through your hood and becomes light and poetry... Thank you poets.... best wishes for you for you! dr. Riza

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Sanzeda S K 25 July 2018

Gives rhythm on mind while reading. Good work :)

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Moonlight, moonshine the most poetic glow May moonlight through my windows flow.... Rhyme amd rhythm of these lines are most empathic. Thanks for sharing.

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Sallam Yassin 06 July 2018

Zaynab this song beautiful, fresh with hope and so full of love. sweet of honey is cream of soul who out of buds born in love thanks to share

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 June 2018

A Beautiful song for Lunar lovers. Adorable moon smiling in different shapes and angles. Loved reading it.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 03 April 2018

A devotional poem on the soothing Moon and the expected peaceful life.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 March 2018

'Crooning a song for any fervent lunar lovers like me Join me in thanking the One Deity for all luminosity. For this luminous nocturnal boon we know fondly as the Moon' - I lend my voice to the chorus you sing so beautifully!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 March 2018

Thank you sir for for your great insightful comments. God bless.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 March 2018

'When my day not my sky is blue Cradle me in your crescent won't you? ' - Loved the passion expressed in these lines! I guess all poets are lunar lovers, though all lunar lovers may not be poets. A nice song, thank you.

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Naila Rais 26 March 2018

I love this poetry.... Such awesome words..... I would like you read my poem LET ME RISE too... Yours deserves 10 +++ratings Naila πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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Laurie van Der Hart 06 March 2018

A lovely lunar lover song! I've just been enjoying the full moon, and thinking of the next one which has a special spiritual significance. Please tell me, where is Port Hart Corte?

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 March 2018

Warm thanx Laurie, oh port Harte courte was in Nigeria where I was born.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 March 2018

Ah sir rajnish manga, The crescent star symbol only belongs to my religion so do try to be understanding as always. U see no one else minded it or criticised it for that. So Pleez be considerate.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 March 2018

Ah sir rajnish manga, you are being unfair today. The moon belongs to everyone but it is also the symbol of my religion, just like your religion has a symbol. That is mainly why I adore the moon, coz it's a symbol of my religion. All of my poems mention my religion some way so Pleez don't mind that. There are Christians and Hindus who sing about their symbols and religious features and I do mine.

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Rajnish Manga 01 March 2018

Amazing poem. I appreciate it but was it necessary to link the crescent moon with a religion. It belongs to the mankind and not to a particular religion or community. Thanks. O' crescent moon you are the symbol of mankind's well wisher religion

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 February 2018

A magnificent poem that captures the beauty and wonders of the moon. When it is read, it is mellifluous. Beautifully crafted and well executed. Full of imagery.10

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Cheryl Tutaan 22 February 2018

Ah, glory be to for thy diamond glow Moonlight, moonshine the most poetic glow May moonlight through my windows flow It sounds like music to my ear...Loving the depths and flow...I can almost sing it! Thank you. a 10+++++ Cherylβ™‘

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Unwritten Soul 21 February 2018

Beautiful poem on lunar and its lovers..i am one of lunar lovers, the crescent or the full moon...i find myself in peace with is light as much as its shadow :) thanks for making a song for us

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White Tiger 21 February 2018

They say that people transform under a moon lit sky. Well, you have proven this metamorphosis in your exquisite writing on such a beautiful rock as the Moon. Our Moon. Thank you for sharing. A 10+++

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Port Hart corte (place of birth)
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