A Song Before Victorious Enemy Comments

some thoughts now are mine write them on my tombstone great poem!

a beautifuland meaningful poem and there on that sword the names of whom we love will be written on that trees our flower will grow... and in that sword which will defeat the enemy who try to scare our little ones, who try to kill our dreams with that sword we will give them what they brought...10++++

Cuts very deep into the heart. To be asking with such gentleness. To entreat your enemies to leave some semblance of your life after defeat. This is an amazing poem. Sherrie

From my Punjabi tashan- Jung-azaadi ki nishan is rangda Yeh mohabbatandi firaq, yeh jungez naam aur ilzaam hi sau rabdi mangda A very wonderful chant of triumphant self.A 10 from me.

Fantastic! A true shout for the peace.Let's make of the flowers our weapons. Congratulations.

victorious enemy! you move from trees, flowers in hand; run; stopped by walls; swords unsheathed; gallows your embrace; blood of the inocent, flows in my vines, in the garden of martyrs. this pained me a lot; great write, Nasser

A proper title for the piece!

It is a pathetic song of a defeated person before victorius enemy.

amazing work of art. 10/10 Nicholas Spandrel

extremely nice --beautifully penned -10 anjali

thats is fary good? you can send it my my poehunter?

That was very good. It sort of gave me chill bumps. I give you Kudos!

Sharp! I think this one is good.

simple poem and very good

interestin fun to readin well said

A good refreshment of all minds, and to the rememberence of almighty, each and every desires are blessfully allowed for each moments. thanks for sharing,10+

Thought provoking and insightful! ! !

truly inspiring! ! ! 'Some people here are mine Write them also on the gallows.' those lines! ! ! ! ! really touched my heart! ! ! !

I have read these words many times. With very few words you have evoked great feelings, my friend. I have only one question. Is there ever a true victor in war, surely every-one loses. Irene

Simple words used but with very deep thoughts that penetrates into one's conscience. Courageous words to dedicate a victorious enemy creating a very sad but comforting song. War is a shared responsiblity, shared aspirations, and shared consequences, of the contending groups. This is a powerful political poem that has very strong messages. This is really an excellent work!