Monday, September 13, 2010

A Song Before Sailing Comments

Rating: 3.2

Wind of the dead men's feet,
Blow down the empty street
Of this old city by the sea
With news for me!
...
Read full text

Bliss William Carman
COMMENTS
Sylvaonyema Uba 21 January 2017

A good display of quatrain. An excellent use of rhyme and sound effects. Nice poem! Sylva-Onyema Uba

0 0 Reply
Amar Agarwala 21 January 2017

Reading the verses of William Carman for the first time. And found it really nice.

1 0 Reply
Ratnakar Mandlik 21 January 2017

Awesome and superb poem that is rich in rhyme and rhythm and at the same time is with deep meaning. Thanks for sharing it here.

1 0 Reply
M Asim Nehal 21 January 2017

Nicely thought and written, thanks for sharing it and congrats for the honours.

2 0 Reply
Mountain Man 21 January 2017

Love this poem & where it leads.

1 0 Reply
Ninah Ruid 21 January 2017

I agree that if you plan to stay with a cheater don't try to find any information. However, in my case I needed it in my state in order to file for a divorce and come out of the relationship. You can't just say I think courts want proof or you end up spending a lot of time and money to fight it out! Finding out was hard, but I was relieved that I wasn't crazy and it's making my divorce go a lot smoother. He would never confess; therefore, I did the best thing for me...find out, no doubt, move on! ! ! contact hotcyberlord@gmail.com.. or text his phone +15402277725 he's a professional and will surely help you out, tell him from Ninah

1 4 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 21 January 2017

Need. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

1 0 Reply
Hamzat Oluwarotimi 21 January 2017

Nice piece poet, death is a necesity

1 0 Reply
Tom Allport 21 January 2017

great write of what was and what is to come to us all?

1 0 Reply
Indira Renganathan 21 January 2017

A touching dolorous poem indeed- -10++++

1 0 Reply
Bernard F. Asuncion 21 January 2017

Nice poem..... Thanks for sharing......

1 0 Reply
Susan Williams 03 December 2015

He is a master - - he sails this poem through the gloom and pain of this world and makes us fear the deep

24 0 Reply
Bliss William Carman

Bliss William Carman

New Brunswick
Close
Error Success