Sunday, January 29, 2012

A Song About Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is all the simple things
That we do and say.
And the much bigger things
That come into play.
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Walterrean Salley
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Soran M. H 25 December 2019

fantastic various description of life, with very nice images....10/10 And life is the wildflowers That one so adores.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 November 2016

yes! life is a complex form of joy and sorrow on path of journey! quite uplifting and inspiring write, thanks for sharing

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Walterrean Salley 30 November 2016

Thank you Dr. Kar for your valued coments.

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Amar Agarwala 22 November 2016

Small, simple and so beautiful! Enjoyed the verses so much. Thank for Sharing Walterrean.

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Walterrean Salley 30 November 2016

Rebecca, thank you. Your comments mean much.

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Walterrean Salley 30 November 2016

Amar, I appreciate your valued comments. Thank you.

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Rebecca Navarre 12 November 2016

Oh! ! ! Is This Ever So Beautiful And So Wonderful Too! ! ! Very True And Inspiring Write! ! ! Wonderfully Painted! ! ! Added To Favorites Too! ! ! Makes My Heart Smile! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++S! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Allotey Abossey 05 June 2015

Well said, great inspiration. God bless you.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 07 February 2015

Very much thought provoking poem. Simple diction with metaphoric expressions make he poem all that worth.

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Heather Wilkins 02 November 2014

life is the ole owl as wise as it could be fro life is everything that pertains to you and me so true excellent write

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Valerie Dohren 11 November 2012

Just browsing through some of your older stuff and landed on this one - lovely Walterrean, very inspired and philosophical.

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Joseph Anderson 28 August 2012

Why do I love your poetry so much-let me count the ways. They show compassion, love, family nature and all the worthwhile things. This one is a fine example

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Spiritual Seeker 09 March 2012

Life is a journey...enriching in spirituality..sad are those who return in emptiness! ! Like your poem greatly. A great 10. Kindly visit my latest piece on ''Life''. Hav a nice day Salley!

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Sajna Kailas 08 March 2012

beautiful poem about life. gone through most of the life situations and wonderfully pictured my dear. Loved it a lot.... Life is the young child And the aged one. Life is all the days. And when the days are done. this stanza, I likes it a lot! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! God Bless You! ! !

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Wahab Abdul 07 March 2012

very philosophical, the poetess had an extraordinary attempt to define life and its intricacies here she succeeded marvelously, how can i go without saying that the poem is an excellent one as i have also written ''the song of life'' on the same theme....I wish success to the poetess.

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Sagar Shelar 05 March 2012

Really inspiring poem. I love it.

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 29 February 2012

This is so true...though, most of us look at the complex side of life, ignoring the simple ones, thereby complicating our world. Nice poen....keep it up.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 27 February 2012

The thought is beautiful. I am glad I started to read your way of writing.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 27 February 2012

It is a beautiful thought. This is Life. We can see the beauty in everything.

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Danny Draper 23 February 2012

Salley, you are totally right here, life is the sum of it's parts which have many components in common but also those places and things special and unique (seemingly) to us. I like your economic and succint style and form, less so often more.

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Ramesh T A 23 February 2012

Life is everything, big or small, joy or sorrow! Indeed everything is nicely said in a simple poem!

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Smoky Hoss 17 February 2012

Wow; this is a wonderful examination of the depths of life. What is, and what stays. Very good thinking, and no small amount of theology here, for those of us who look for such.

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Hans Vr 03 February 2012

Very nice poem, Salley. Iike very much the wisdom inside these melodious verses. Well written

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