Thursday, May 25, 2017

A Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

When with love, and fire in your eyes,
You catch me in a deep surprise,
I turn from you, to hide my love:
Meek and weak just like a dove.
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Valsa George 27 February 2019

A very passionate song of love! This can be seen as a message of love written at a moment when one is missing that one person deeply loved and is sent to him at a moment of intense longing! The reader can easily hear the heartbeats of one pining for love and it is beautifully and poignantly expressed here!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2017

This is beautifully crafted poem on love. Each and every line is touching and amusing. I quote... When with love, and fire in your eyes, You catch me in a deep surprise, I turn from you, to hide my love: Meek and weak just like a dove. ********************************* I write a verse and think of you: A red heart that's dipped in blue; And read the bruises through my lines, Till I forget that love is blind. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

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Richard Beevor 11 June 2017

Absolutely beautiful poetry, I love this!

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