A Song....! Comments

Wow, great ending, ... I wasn't expecting that. Well done, it makes the reader wonder! Brian

dear konji, this is a good poem, but i think if you could do with just a little less words it would have been better.just an opinion dear.and thnx fr ur communication. viren

Hi Konjit, Thanks for your welcome message and your kind comments. I like this one; the way you have used the song as the focus underlines the tragedy of the death. Keep on writing. Love Eve x

Wow. This is really special, I'm left a little bit speechless on this one! Well done, Moyax

If you have to go, what a way to go! There's nothing like a good song, or a poem that leaves you curious.

This is outstanding Konjit. You really have caught the moment so well, from the incident to the feelings of others to the feeling of the narrator. Awesome. Love Denis Joe

Boy, I love this poem because just like your main character I'm crazy for music in my headphones! I hope Bob Dylan or Van Morrison will be the last guy singing some poetic truth to me!