Friday, May 16, 2008

A Song Comments

Rating: ★5.0

I stood and watched who passes by
Bumping and hurting I don’t know why
Some time “hi” and “hello” then smile
All the passers I saw end up to sigh
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Jordan Legaspi
hello hurting
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 July 2010

Flip side of jilted love portrayed in metaphorical flab …excellent Sir … thanks for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Marieta Maglas 26 September 2009

interesting poem, lovely to read...........10

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Obinna Eruchie 25 September 2009

Vivid, but interesting to read.

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Eyan Desir 23 September 2009

the poem is deep really leaves the reader pondering tens

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 09 September 2009

Well expressed poem: 'Angels like to catch the fallen kisses'.

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Jordan Legaspi

Jordan Legaspi

Davao City, Philippines
Jordan Legaspi
Jordan Legaspi
Davao City, Philippines
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