Wednesday, November 12, 2008

A Son's Lament Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting in the hospital waiting room
Atmosphere filled with pain and gloom
Weeping inside those invisible tears
A torrent of emotions mostly of fear
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T.James Becker
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 16 November 2008

Rhythym and rhyme are well coined. flow is good. emotion well expressed. you are a born poet

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Ron Flowers 15 November 2008

Very beautifully said, T James, so sad, so full of emotion. God be with you Ron

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 14 November 2008

Its heart-wrenching poem......my friend. Expressed with a simple eloquence that actually accentuates the agony....

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Sylvia Feeley 13 November 2008

My prayers are with you. Excellent work.

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Stacey Watts 12 November 2008

Oh wow very powerful and sad. What a heard ordeal to be faced with losing a loved one. I am so Sorry...

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T.James Becker

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