Sitting in the hospital waiting room
Atmosphere filled with pain and gloom
Weeping inside those invisible tears
A torrent of emotions mostly of fear
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Very beautifully said, T James, so sad, so full of emotion. God be with you Ron
Its heart-wrenching poem......my friend. Expressed with a simple eloquence that actually accentuates the agony....
Oh wow very powerful and sad. What a heard ordeal to be faced with losing a loved one. I am so Sorry...
Rhythym and rhyme are well coined. flow is good. emotion well expressed. you are a born poet