My past wasn't the prettiest but it was something.
Looking back I hated my father.
It kind of made me sick to my stomach.
When I look in the mirror I saw my father in me
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This is magneficient poem. I can totally relate. Personally I grew up w/o a father but thank God I found him and we became father and son which I dream all my life. I hope you too can have your dad back. The poem by the way is 10++fantastic!
if ur dad really left that sux! mine did to.. but ur a great writter the anger makes it more exiteing
Wow....i hope that this isn't how you really felt/feel about your father.... I love this poem because of the emotion...a bit of anger but just overall a excellent poem -Tyease
oh wow! ! ! i could not imagine how hard it would be ot og through something like this. i love how you expressed oyur feelings in this poem and it really does open my eyes lot. thank you for posting this. i greatly appreciate it.
I like it. very impressive