Thursday, June 1, 2006
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O’er the crest of the hill
Came hence a cry so shrill,
That with darting eyes
I searched the skies
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Landrey
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Lisa Wilkinson
09 June 2006
Well described and imaginative poem Landry, I will keep an eye out for you if you do the same.10/10x
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Jonzo Bandwagoner
07 June 2006
Fantastic! Your imagery is excellent; it made the words float mystically off the page. Keep the good work up! Jonzo
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7/22/2025 1:54:09 PM # 1.0.0
Your poem is excellent in its perception, conception and presentation. Just add two more syllables to your fourth line and your poem will be perfect. You can qualify the skies like darkened skies or cloudy or cloudless skies. Just a suggestion. Good luck and god bless you. arya from India