Saturday, February 23, 2008

A Solitary Walk Comments

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I walked the shore one lonesome night;
a shore so far from your embrace.
I heard the waves lap at the shore
and heard the voice of the sweetly singing sea.
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Rebekah Gamble
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Farouq Ali 19 August 2008

nicely done! ! keep writin..

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Flávio Bhawk 05 May 2008

I loved this one, I could imagine the scenes while I was reading, beautiful write! I liked specially the last part: 'I stood and watched as the waves took the prints of my walk, and saw that no wave could take your prints left on my heart.' It's just... just... great! That's how I'm feeling right now, this goes to my favorites. Keep writing =D

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 March 2008

walk the solitary write....and you' ll prevailed.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 23 February 2008

A very nice poem, meaningful, provoking! Thanks! LC

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Rebekah Gamble

Rebekah Gamble

Pittsburgh, Penna., U.S.A.
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