A Solid Foundation Of Lies Comments
We built on a solid foundation of lies-
And then it all crumbled, much to our surprise.
I know that I loved you, no doubt you loved me-
But the dreams we were building just never could be.
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We stared at the ashes with tears in our eyes... Doomed by a solid foundation of lies....superb!
Insightful piece elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A work of an intricate mind.
Poignant yet beautiful poem of love. Wonderful poetic expressions!
A very intelligently composed poem.5 Stars full. I have enjoyed tremendously
Congratulatiions being chosen by PoemHunter and Team as The Member Poem Of The Day. I am very happy for you, dear poet.
A Solid Foundation Of Lies. A magnificent poem about that. I cite here the concluding lines, very intelligently put: it caused us to cry... We stared at the ashes with tears in our eyes... Doomed by a solid foundation of lies.
Hearty congratulation John for the poem of the day
A solid foundation of lies written with such conviction and strong emotion.......10
Like moths to a flame we were drawn by desire- Like Icaurus' wings we were doomed by the fire.
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7/25/2025 12:51:46 AM # 1.0.0
Sad but elegant poem, particularly the last stanza.5*