* A Solemn Day! Comments

A Great write. Well written. Loved reading it.

'Like water I came and like wind I go! ' is a magnificent line in a grea poem

Loved this vivid poetic. write. You captured in essence all of R-day all to well. Penned creatively! ; D

Excellent work of art. Your sharp sense of observation, general awareness, attention to detail and of course creative packaging deserve a special mention here. While reading it, I imagined I was watching all the events you have described here on R-day in my mind's television. What about a repeat performance for the I-Day, too? Looking forward to it eagerly. Undoubtedly, a 10++++++++ here.

excellent narrative poem, thank you for sharing......10+++++++

an announcement from one who saw the spectacle first hand.very nice.posted 10 surya

great write sir..................well penned

A fine chronicle of a day of national importance (I Day- Independence Day? , R Dayi Republic Day?) A bit like Whitman.

very thoughtful write....I appreciate your effort