Tuesday, August 14, 2012

A Soldiers Lullaby Comments

Rating: 4.3

So many scars,

attitude is not to be messed with,
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Connor Whyte
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Amanda Horton 07 July 2016

I love this poem a lot of heart was pit into it

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very graphic picture of war...good poem

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Sandy Player 10 January 2013

in the end we are groups in the same humam race being taught our duty: to kill the people born in a different place or into a different background. I susppose it has many meanings when we are said to be killing ourselves in war. thanks for leaving it in the broad aim, you understand its the only way to give a tribute without being a hypocrite. good job. -M

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Poetheart Morgan 03 January 2013

The war is out of the soldier. He only do your duty, Very well writing.

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Leon Somer 14 December 2012

your poem was very well writen, as a service member, i'm very honored to see dedication to what we do.

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Makayla Straight 10 December 2012

I am a future soldier, I leave to basic next month and this gave me goosebumps and excitement all at once. This is an amazing piece. Thank you for sharing..

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Samantha Rak 30 September 2012

Connor, you never cease to amaze me! PLEASE don't stop writing! ????~ and Cheers :)

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