A Soldiers Lullaby Comments

I love this poem a lot of heart was pit into it

very graphic picture of war...good poem

in the end we are groups in the same humam race being taught our duty: to kill the people born in a different place or into a different background. I susppose it has many meanings when we are said to be killing ourselves in war. thanks for leaving it in the broad aim, you understand its the only way to give a tribute without being a hypocrite. good job. -M

The war is out of the soldier. He only do your duty, Very well writing.

your poem was very well writen, as a service member, i'm very honored to see dedication to what we do.

I am a future soldier, I leave to basic next month and this gave me goosebumps and excitement all at once. This is an amazing piece. Thank you for sharing..

Connor, you never cease to amaze me! PLEASE don't stop writing! ????~ and Cheers :)