Friday, October 5, 2012

A Soldier's Will Comments

Rating: 5.0

The soldiers march on in the alley
I have to join to the army
Mother, this is my last voice
Sorry, i had no choice
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nader baheri
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Zahra Shariat 27 March 2014

Hmm, good Image of a war , It reminded me a Turkish folk song which a soldier talks to his mother , , , (Ana man bir sarbazam Yarali....)

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A Dark Lifetime . 17 February 2013

This is exactly how my uncle felt for going to war. And all my other relatives to. They apologies all the time and all I ever felt was sickness. How can someone ask another person to go and fight for their voice? How can a politician say to his people to fight for him, when he cant do it himself? Thanks for sharing another masterpiece, truly thank you!

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Valsa George 17 October 2012

Your great zeal to be the guardian of your land is praise worthy, also your love for your mother! A nice poem rich in warm sentiments! Thanks for your invitation! !

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Unwritten Soul 11 October 2012

Nader, its true...the true voice is owned by the army and anyone who suffers from their very honest the sacrifice... Dont cry for your mother as you are protecting your mother and your motherland, Oh mothers dont cry for them just hold prayers to send for each of your noble children, to fight for love, a love for peace and peace that has meaning for each people here...I will also will never cry and send my prayer if you gone in the battlefield, to back safe in your mother's arm..like we supposed feel them form real sun...and you will back to all, bringing warm to the fire... soldier keep humanity in life and not used to do killing and fill people blood as part of your heart...but if we can be a soldier of peace use mind, and that is what a human should use_Soul

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Kelvin Owusu 05 October 2012

This is such a beautiful piece nicely written

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