Daymare demons spiral your head.
There is no rest in your soft bed.
Images of death reveal.
The guilt you hide, but feel.
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You make us feel what it must have been like for that soldier and live in his shoes. So well described, and makes you sit up and realise just what they go through during and after war to keep us safe
Hi David This poem makes my heart go out to all soliders that fight in wars, what must they go through, their minds must be so tormented.You have written this poem with a heart felt mind, (beautiful work) I have written a poem called (Treasured Friends0 you may care to read it when you get time.
I'm sure you are speaking of one particular soldier here but the beauty and sadness all in one, of this poem could speak to many soldiers coming home from combat. Well done David
Very touching and genuine. i am sure you have eloquently expressed what many young men suffer in silence. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra
I think that the emotion you poured into this, makes it stand up by itself, very profound writing, Love duncan X
The nightmares of the horrors they have seen, reliving every moment in dreams, how do you switch it all off, and try to go back to life as once it had been, all the while feeling the guilt of having Survived... David 10
Nothing is ever as it seems. The faces of returned soldiers often hide so much. If young men knew what they were going into! ! ? Another very convincing mindscape. You bring wisdom and incisive insights to your work David, but it never has a forced quality, which is very hard to achieve. Another valuable, high quality poem. jim
How unfortunate that so many men had to go through such devistation. The aftermath is harsh and trying, I can't even begin to understand what they have been through and the mental anquish they suffer because of the war. One can only pray that the leaders find another way to solve their differences. Another great poem David.---Melvina---
A very heartfelt poem that shows the pain of war. Pain for everything involved. So sad and so open and true. Marilyn