a soldier coming home
he gets off the bus and looks around
families are being reunited
and lovers are kissing
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wow...cool, a well painted picture of the people who fight...I once was one of them, Top marks
I was...am... a soldier. thanks for still taking the time to respect what we sacrifice. its going on my favourites list.
this is a really nice piece thanks for your comments on mine 10...........10................10.........10............10...........10..........10.........10........10
Great writing here Shannon with vivid imagery and yet so very poignant very well done
Well that's nearly enough to make me cry. Well done, Shannon.
Such a beautiful poem,