A Sojourn Comments

This was indeed a great adventure for me too (as a reader) , for I had traveled with the speaker through fascinating imagery and places, and brought in mind excursions of my own at the mountain. I very much enjoyed the read and the trip. Great!

Very insightful and at the end of your brief sojourn I felt life is but a sojourn and we should always remain prepared for the heavenly bus that might come anytime........very well composed.....10

We are preparing in advance on any journeys but somehow we cannot do it certainly in the last journey where we can't get any clues. A good writing and meaningful.

A lovely write. Bien!

A journey from micro to macro! Very profound write!

.. the last stanza is quiet interesting, , , loved the whole poem, , , , in a beautiful way you described the trip, , nice write, , ,

Interesting poem. It took me to the wonderful hill station with beautiful boating ride. The question at the last left me wondered, should I tell lie or should I tell truth? Well I feel I haven't packed the things yet for this ride. I think I should start packing it. So that when the next bus comes to take me to heavenly ride, I will definitely board it. Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.