Tuesday, December 9, 2014

A Sojourn Solitary Traveller Comments

Rating: 5.0

Again, he embarks on this journey,
A journey without destination
With a slight change;
This time, it is alone
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Avinash Nair
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Roseann Shawiak 02 February 2015

A very heart-wrenching poem, filled with the sadness of life's suffering and turmoil. Very great emotive expression in this poem with a beautiful steady and intense rhythm flowing all the way through. Beautiful poem expressing sorrow while going through it alone. Giving you a 10 for this great poem. Thank you, RoseAnn

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Laya Bajpai 16 December 2014

A very thought provoking poem Avinash. It brings tears to my eyes to think of the loneliness suffered by the traveller

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