Monday, July 22, 2013

A Soft Summer's Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

We sit by the stream
On this soft summer's day
Entranced by the dance
As the dragonflies play.
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Owain Glyn
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Susan Lacovara 23 March 2014

This to me speaks of Camelot! Oh to be amidst the beauty you depict. Quite lovely, glad I strolled on by....PEACE

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Susan Lacovara 05 December 2013

To be warmed by the sun, blessed by the breeze, caressed by the lush of grass, green...and then, as luck would have it...share a day of such splendor with someone who adds a beating to your heart..aahhhh...perfect! Your poem pinpoints all that is lovely. PEACE

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Hazel Durham 23 August 2013

So beautiful with your words that create nature in such a wonderful way entwined with romance!

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Dipy Hermonite 23 August 2013

What a wonderful poem! ! Your poetic depiction of nature took me into your defined moments. Loved every bit of them.

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Valerie Dohren 22 July 2013

Another gem Owain, you paint a beautiful scene with your words, with a touch of romance.

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Danny Draper 22 July 2013

A beautifully constructed and descriptive tribute th the gentle and euphoric majesty and our occasional reconnection with its greatness and the perfection that sharing that experience with a loved one brings.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 22 July 2013

lovely write, owain. thanks for sharing this sunshine.

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