A Soft Breeze Comments

Wow, this is so eloquent and beautiful and spare. thanks

You have captured your butterfly in the transient breeze so well. This poem is as gentle as the flutter and I can feel a silence in the air as I try to hear a sound. Beautiful Laurie. love Karin

I enjoyed this poem, I will read more

Capturing the sun for an instant, Rachel Ann Butler

i know i've read this before....so either you posted it, withdrew it, and re-posted it....or I'm psychic....in any case...i'm loving it even more.....

Fantastic Laurie, simple and like the title suggests soft lyric.Nice ending.10

Laurie, that was beautiful with that natural rhythm that you seem so apt with. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. All the best David