A Snowflake In The Sun Comments

......So caught my eye, then melted, done....// beautiful expression

Sweet short piece.

The remembrance is green and shall always remain to. Loved it.

a lovely poem of how one frosted look melted to your appeal? ..............well penned

Then melted! Thanks for sharing.

most delightful write, yet i do admire. thanks for sharing

I agree with Brian Stafford a delight John

Wow! Much content in few words! Well done.

A most charming poem!

A delight to read this poem with its quiet sweetness! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

In that fraction of time you've made a beautiful memory Susan. Simply Lovely

Simply put, yet contains a world of feelings.....a moment in time.

I love this so simple but so meaningful :)

Causes me to remember too many a quick heart's desire...a flirtive glance with one returned... then gone... nicely pened dear poet.

Short and sweet and in melt water complete.

lovely short and sweet. a good message.

Short but shining.is the snow flake game.

A complete poem. A touchy note. 10/10.

hold it, those words, for my hearts in them do melt!

Wow, also short and sweet :) Just like nothing gold stays (Robert Frost :) Deep attraction disappears like those who seem with exceptional qualities seem unreal