A sneak preview
As winter makes
Its debut…
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The season, compelling reason To hold and hug for warmth. Who compelled you in this poem's reality? You are like a phantom listener or viewer of the entire Indian picnic show--kids bowl, kids roll, girls carry on in footsteps, women knitting sweaters, typical indianism galore-you find the same show somewhat in Australia and USA-they also could not try to be different. Nice recapitulation.
The season, compelling reason To hold and hug for warmth. the lines so close to my heart................................love premji
The poet's eyes take a 'sneak preview' of all the happenings on a Winter's day! While with a chilled glass of lemonade under a cool shade, we try to drive the Summer's heat away; the Winter is embraced with herbal tea and shawls and high- neck pullovers - when it comes our way! But the poet's keen eyes spots the begger women in tatters giving that human touch to Poetry - I must say! 10! -Raj
You take me to another world of winter and I love the experience. The imagery is captivating and warm. Each stanza is a charming poem picture.10/10 Always your friend, Sandra
Winter time dress of Nature and men are colourful to enjoy with fun and gaiety to get warmth for health!
it's a good poetic portrait...a really wide canvas...all colors well strewn in...10