A Snatch Of Spring Comments

This poem really moved me

So very sorry to see that happening before my eyes, but luckily I have finished my comments on this poem as TMPOTD

CONGRATS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hoorray! 5 Stars full on Top for this poem. This poem is no more on that place, replaced by Poem Hunter with Dr. Asim Nehal's poem

unexpecting bullets, her sister was shot dead by such a bullet, because she did not move to an expensive neighbourhood, yes, it's the story of flying bullets and its sequel. Touching poem, dear Poet! 5 Stars full

Like the youth of the two world famous tennis playing Venus ans Serena Williams. Their youth before they became rich and moved to another neighbourhood, the old neighbourhood was everyday full of

Very touching poem. War is always ugly. Thanks for sharing.

Little Melody was in chase of that dream, In a classroom figuring what future she'll bring, When bullets shifted her dream to a scream, And all that crumbled; a of Spring. /// beautiful poem penned; melodious life couldn't lead to the happiness but the death snatched all the elated motions of springtime; wonderful poem shared; beautiful feelings to read; congrats for being selected this as POD...from me 5*****

'When bullets shifted her dream to a scream, And all that crumbled; a of Spring.' - Saddened by this poignant end.

Little Melody was in chase of that dream, In a classroom figuring what future she'll bring, When bullets shifted her dream to a scream, And all that crumbled; a of Spring. Bullets and scream. tony

Aah! Such tragedy. I do hope it was fiction. Well-done!

Yahweh shifted the burden! ! ! ! Praise Yahweh! HalleluYahweh! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A profound and touching poem. Heartiest congrats on poem of the day.

Very meaningful write. Flow is amazing and very interesting to read. Thanks for sharing and congrats.

Congratulations with most deserving The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray! 5 Stars Full Vote for this very sad poem about a scattered dream. I read every day like this news, The death of very young people, true saddest. A true scintillating poem. Excellent.

Congratulations the nice poem being POD

Little Melody was in chase of that dream, In a classroom figuring what future she'll bring, When bullets shifted her dream to a scream, And all that crumbled; a of Spring.

A well crafted poem of the day... Truly exceptional. Congrats on your featured piece.......5 stars*****

Well written poem. Touching