A Snail In The Rain! Comments

I can observe the problem of water-harvesting.Thats the reason i tell do not make Nehru and Jinnah -emotional and regional arts, law and humanities people supreme emblem of a nation even if they win nobel prizes for being best lickers of white hip muscles from Cambridge to India converted, uncoverted, diverted and all other form of displacements.It could have been Bengal and Punjab -the two river giant city states who could have solved the water crisis in India.But they are busy now after it all started with those two rubbish bags complaining the flow of water in meters, centimeters and kilometers thank god if not millimeters.This happens not in United Kingdom where they have only one river to reckon with.This happens ironically in riverine countries who must research what is there special in those water compositions that makes one a traitor.A thought provoking write..

A strong feeling of hurt lurking somewhere in the deep recesses of the heart! ! The melancholic poignancy, intensified by images like snail, salt etc! !

Pain has been metaphorically depicted in the snail's frail body. carrying a heavy load. Very original and pleasing in the last lines. A must read.

Ahan a fine metaphorical poem. Deep musing.

Ahan a fine metaphorical poem. Deep musing.