Saturday, April 9, 2016

A Smokescreen Comments

Rating: 4.5

Bragging at work, telling alI I'm over saying goodbye
to my daughter, going home to eat and eat and eat,
bread, granola and instant oats & wondering what's
going on, why am I depressed looking at the lovely
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Tom Billsborough 09 April 2016

Good habits can be learned early if you make writing an adventure, yours is a very interesting poem, with a fine rhythm and a surprising conclusion. If you actually teach children, they are lucky kids. Tom Billsborough

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