Saturday, January 19, 2008

A Smoker's Sob(1) (A White Stick Destroys Everything) Comments

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I feel very sorry,
After seeing the patient breaths with difficulty.
His chest huffing and puffing painfully,
Like a fish out of water.
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Priyanka Shetty 09 June 2008

nice poem.... thanks for sharing........ like u said if some1 would quit smoking reading this. ur mission is accomplished... keep up ur goos work.............

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Amie-Lee ...... 26 February 2008

Good work, shows just what smoking does to you. Take care......xoxoxoxoxo

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