Thursday, August 30, 2007

A Smoke Comments

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Cool air
Enchanting darkness
So quiet
The usual ruckus is gone
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Colin J... 30 August 2007

'A lonely light In the wasteland Of relentless Unyielding dark* I like this poem, even though I am an ex-smoker... There is beauty in everything. but that that beauty can kill (deadly nightshade) .. (lightening) , etc. Colin J...

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Goldy Locks 30 August 2007

weaving with no direction. at least no distinct direction. makes it fall flat. descriptive, however. best care, sjg

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