A Smoke Picture Comments

It does not matter what a poem costs. The pen and ink is worth the jourrney, Friend. Brilliant expression my dear friend Sandra.5 stars.

‘…Thickets of wordless poems capture thoughts, …’ Wow! Wow! ! Wow! ! ! ... Carried forward in gusto of limbo…Thanks Ma’am Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

Your smoke bursts into a flame.

Your poem is pure Autumn, Nostalgia, Tenderness.. I have noticed many readers are just left with no words enough to express the feeling they have reading your poetry..But it is surely an Emotion in the perfect sense of this word. And what is Emotion, is Truth. Thanks for sharing, Sandra. Amary, always your friend.

Stunning imagery Sandra in this beautiful and perfect piece - a very touching poem

Fine poetry definitely maybe emotions on parchment so scenic as the darkness in nothingness.

You have come up with an imaginative piece, Sandra. Thanks.

Softly eloquent and full of surprises this poem is one of your best. It is rich with nostalgia, charcoal images and a reminder of the importance of friendship. Your use of perfect iambic pentameter expresses tenderness without ever resorting to sentimentality. 'You spoke Autumn in seven languages, but only thought in Hebrew, so you said.' touched particularly deeply. Thank you. Love, Alison ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Very beautiful words indeed, very flowery indeed.. nice to read.. yaeh Mr. Martin did say it all.. this one did touch me.. nice beautiful poems can always make the mind at ease.. with love shan

How remarkable this poem is. I am left looking for words - not for THE RIGHT WORDS just for Words to describe how this has touched me. A poem written to a poet I loved it

After mine long absence from Poem hunter its pleasure to read your great poem. Thanks.

another great poetry, thanks sandra.

A nostalgic tribute! Another compelling poem from your creative quill.

You plant seeds of poemism in our brain and they grow into beautiful words in seconds...magic +++++++10 regards

So beautifully expressed, Sandra. A smoke picture that can be tasted, breathed. Keep writing - it's good for all our souls. N

beautiful poem with wonderful images and thougts..

beautiful poem with wonderful images and thougts..

Your words flow deeply into my hungry veins, wanting for more.Good job Sandra dear.

Yes, I so love this poem from start to finish. Your poetic prowess makes it worth the read and praise! Very creative and brilliant! :)

A nostalgic tribute to a Patron Spirit. Gray images drive memory, dreams and reflections. Old friends do not disappear, but dwell with us for all time, even beyond physical separation. The image of hands and trees is very moving. - Will