Saturday, November 28, 2015

A Smiling Photograph Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see everything smiling in her portrait!
Wish mortality to the lovely smiles,
what made her a smiling barbie doll?
It's love my friend!
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Akhtar Jawad
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M Asim Nehal 30 November 2015

Killer smile well explored Janab.......Sorry to know she is no more yet the shining teeth is showing us the way to keep smiling forever.

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Valsa George 29 November 2015

It has been a lovely photograph! I too have felt the same, seeing it on face book.....! You have written a lovely poem on a photograph which is smiling all over! A cute girl called off untimely by her Heavenly Father..... a cousin of Patricia Grantham!

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Akhtar Jawad 30 November 2015

I was shocked to know she is no more on the earth. If I would have known it earlier, my poem would have been a little different. Still I am thinking to edit the poem and add a few more lines.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2015

Beauty is expressed through smile. Love is well reflected in this amazing narration. Drafting such an interesting poem on lovely photograph is definitely wise motive.10

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Kelly Kurt 29 November 2015

Beautiful poem, beautiful photograph

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