Monday, June 7, 2010

A Smile You Had Never Seen Before Comments

Rating: 1.5

Like the dissected rainbow of abused starlets
Like the beginning or the end of my misappropriated
Hope
That I cannot see the outcome for, and yet the sea
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Robert Rorabeck
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Goldy Locks 28 July 2010

The ending falls flat for me - the last line or two. but up until that it's extremely life enriching. cheers goldy

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